Comments on: Is This A Good Beginning 2 A Novel? http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/ All you need to know about Provillus Fri, 13 May 2011 07:16:12 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Riissale http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-5474 Riissale Mon, 12 Oct 2009 11:15:59 +0000 http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/#comment-5474 I think that's a great beginning for your novel. I'd like to see where it goes. The whole a little bit of one and a little bit of another in terms of POVs is something I like, and it flows. You give enough to get us in, and then bring us out, so we're wanting to know more lol. Like me. I'm truly curious now. I like it :). I think that’s a great beginning for your novel. I’d like to see where it goes. The whole a little bit of one and a little bit of another in terms of POVs is something I like, and it flows. You give enough to get us in, and then bring us out, so we’re wanting to know more lol. Like me. I’m truly curious now. I like it :) .

]]> By: SmellyBe http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-5473 SmellyBe Mon, 12 Oct 2009 08:29:39 +0000 http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/#comment-5473 LOVING the idea!! LOVING the idea!!

]]> By: dirty deeds http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-5472 dirty deeds Mon, 12 Oct 2009 05:13:48 +0000 http://freeprovillusreview.com/1081/is-this-a-good-beginning-2-a-novel/#comment-5472 O_o i love it! O_o
i love it!

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